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Copyright: Jacline Alice (farradhim) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 104 W: 50 N: 157] (1466)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2015-12-21
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D3200, Nikkor 55-300 AF-S DX 1:4.5-5.6 G ED VR
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/320 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2016-02-09 7:44
Viewed: 1260
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I get mice from my house and instead of throwing them in the garbage I give them (dead) to the crows
I sat patiently waiting for the crow to come for I knew I only had ONE shot at this....
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Another great artwork of the week...nature by abs track
BRAVO JACLINE ALICE

It's a good idea to feed the crows and gives you an opportunity to bring them in to photograph, especially in winter when food is scarce. Do it enough and they will get used to it making it easier on you! For me personally it's a shame that the detail in the crow's head area is so soft and lacking detail which I'm guessing is where the crow is starting to move off - I like the wing blur, that gives it life but would have liked to see the head sharp. As these birds are coming down to feed, maybe feeding them somewhere where the sun shines on them from behind you (as much as possible) and maybe open up the aperture a little to around F5.6 or so to give you a faster shutter speed? Just some ideas ...

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