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Heart Ring

Heart Ring
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Copyright: Jacline Alice (farradhim) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 104 W: 50 N: 157] (1466)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-02-09
Categories: Daily Life, Event, Macro, Mood
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ18
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/200 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-02-12 7:10
Viewed: 1776
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I know this has been done many times before, this is my try at it as I gave it as a "homework" on the group I teach. I used natural light (sun) for it. As for the "klah" mentioned in the text, it is for the Pern lovers...

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Hi Jacline,
Beautiful idea,well done,congratulation.
Best regards,

good work,
i love the light you chose.
good sharpness, details and composition!
best regards, ingrid

Salut Jacline

Jolie idée
Cette bague avec son ombre en forme de coeur au milieu d'un livre....
Fort romantique
Nice shot

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  • Dai Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 189 W: 56 N: 247] (1214)
  • [2009-02-12 10:09]
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Hi Jacline
It has turned out well for you. Perhaps a love poem for the text might have made the shot even more apt.

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27563)
  • [2009-02-12 10:46]

Hi Jacline,
outstanding composition.Great idea.Perfect light and shadow.Congratulations.Necla.

Very creative way to use the ring to create the heart shadow. to make it the perfect romantic picture I'd have tried to have used a piece of text with the word "love" liberally splashed around it.
Thanks for sharing

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  • Gasleb Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 77 W: 32 N: 152] (2219)
  • [2009-02-12 19:21]

Hi! Jacline,
Your try it's highly successful,Nice macro and composition.I like the reflected on the ring and the shadow of the ring.Good Job.Bravo! You are a good student

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3311 W: 1066 N: 5188] (23042)
  • [2009-02-12 19:36]
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Bonjour Jacline,
De retour après une grande semaine d'absence, je constaste ton retour sur TL avec plaisir!
Ce macro est différent de tes photos habituelles et tu as maîtrisé le sujet avec brio! Même si le sujet est un classique, tu lui as donné une belle touche personnelle avec cette composition. Excellent rendu de textures et de la lumière avec les ombres projetées. Bravo! Annie

Hi Jacline,
This is a fantastic idea, and beautifully done.
Images sometime have a soul.
I just love it, Well expose, superb contrast, everything under control. no hot spot, yet bright and luminous. Bravo.

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 0 N: 1852] (14495)
  • [2009-02-14 6:49]

Ive seen it more but every time Im impresssed again Jac.


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  • Goca (93)
  • [2009-02-14 6:57]

Hello Jacline,

Really good work, i like the light and shadow, well done.

All the best,

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  • Doudou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 667 W: 2 N: 1533] (8802)
  • [2010-07-17 10:41]

Bonjour Jacline,

Et, c'est pas mal du tout, cet anneau posé entre les pages du livre et formant un coeur, il y a une belle luminosité qui aide les ombres à se former avec beauté, la netteté est parfaite, bref une bonne maîtrise qui mérite d'être regardée!!!

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