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Father, watch me fall

Father, watch me fall
Photo Information
Copyright: Mehdi Hosseini (metall) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 278 W: 10 N: 158] (2964)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ20
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): dada's favorits 2, degetica's favs [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-11-11 13:26
Viewed: 2310
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 46
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Father watch me fall
Witness my mistakes
I have lost it all
I'm about to break
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To perryhooter: I Triedmetall 1 11-12 13:50
To Dingo: Thanksmetall 1 11-12 13:48
To degetica: SABINAmetall 1 11-12 13:47
To rajhema: Rajeshmetall 1 11-12 13:45
To dada: ANCAmetall 1 11-12 13:44
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what can say?
It's perfect!!!
Those colours are making me cry!!

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  • JeffK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 53 W: 4 N: 41] (712)
  • [2006-11-11 13:50]

Hi Mehdi,

Agree, what can you say but what an amazing photo. The colors, composition, lighting, are perfect, TFS.


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  • hobo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 0 N: 28] (185)
  • [2006-11-11 14:01]

Hi Mehdi,
what a masterpiece, did you apply any filters or pp?

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2505 W: 368 N: 2626] (11966)
  • [2006-11-11 14:52]
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The mood you evoke is not a pleasant one... but the way you invoke it is perfection, Mehdi. Magnificent colours and a nice misty effect on the background.
The human figure is a nice silhouette, but I find the white halo (maybe you used too much feather?) around it a bit distracting...
Anyway, it's a nice idea!

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  • Alba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 537 W: 0 N: 206] (2760)
  • [2006-11-11 17:04]

Hi Mehdi,
Although the mood is rather desperate, the colours, natural or not, are wonderful! Congratulations.

Well manipulated image to get the desired mood Mehdi..

good job..


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  • peetol Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 554 W: 51 N: 694] (5745)
  • [2006-11-11 18:41]

Brilliantly rendered. Well developed concept! Great colors and lighting is superb.



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  • Konie Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 29 N: 298] (3006)
  • [2006-11-11 19:13]

A very strong image Medhi. The notes likewise add drama to the image. Kudos Mehdi! Thanks for sharing.


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  • law Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 509 W: 75 N: 80] (1764)
  • [2006-11-12 7:33]

Great work my friend. Well done.

fascinating colors!wonderful compo and mood!i like the note too!

Silhoutte is awesome and the color pattern is marvelous Mehdi. Framing and sharpness all talks its own way.
Nicely done Mehdi

Very dramatic, beautiful colors, very moving image.


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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 896 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2006-11-12 10:54]
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speachless... I can't image how you did it, I look at the atmosphere, the colours, the compo... speachless!!! superb mood, brilliant shot!



Have a nice day,

hello Mehdi,
Absolutely brilliant photo!
Well done and best regards, Daniel

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3627 W: 881 N: 2607] (21386)
  • [2006-11-13 4:10]

wow, wow, wow ...
I'm speechless ...
dramatic, powerful, stuning ...
congrats !


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  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1153 W: 70 N: 1116] (16)
  • [2006-11-13 12:31]

Perfect. The colors, composition, lighting & mood are perfect. Well done.

WOW...houlàlà (in french !) how it is splendid!

practically a work of art a painting in photograph….One feels a major emotion when one looks at this photo.

un great cheer, I draw you my hat!

Hello Mehdi!

Superb post. Sad mood but great photo! Try a black frame instead of white . And let me know which one you prefer ?

Salam Mehdi,

A very sad mood picture, you showed the atmosphere very well along with good notes.
Great PP job.


Wonderful capture Mehdi. Very moody and creative. I love the light in the forground. It actually hightlights the different light in the background.


Excellent work Mehdi. Lovely tones, well composed and the image definitely suits the title and your notes. Well done and TFS,


Many thanks for your comment on ‘Hazy Days’

Changing position would have brought in even more buildings left and right :)

Hello Mehdi.

Excellent image, nice composition and colors.
Beatiful silhuete.

Jose Luis.

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