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model life
Photo Information
Copyright: Gundega Dege (sundew) (3759)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-02-17
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Olympus E300
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): TL Beautiful, Sensual Shots [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-02-21 5:57
Viewed: 2335
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 30
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A very graphic picture what is not usual for a portrait ! The choice of the B&W is perfect.

I like the board on the wall !!! --> You should have a look at my pictures entitled "Snow" or "Borther / Sister(s)".

graet b/w photo great pov and composition the texture is amazing i think it is perfect

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  • luisa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 355 W: 0 N: 73] (1408)
  • [2007-02-21 6:41]

beautifull composition!! nice choice of the b&w and the photo on the wall is great!!Nice idea!


Good comp & pose. Great image. Also like the repeating image - very subtle.

Great composition and perspective. Very cool.


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  • femmy (24)
  • [2007-02-21 9:36]

Excellent B/W photo, texture is brilliant! Well done!

great work, very beatifull,


Wonderful, shot Gundega, I loveit, bravo.

great compo, contrasts, toning and posing!
I love the triangles in the upper squares
nice studio !

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 67 N: 53] (5121)
  • [2007-03-03 11:07]

A life dedicated to one snapshot on the wall.

I like the use of the triangle on the wall, asociating to a spotlight of reflectors. Repeated similar geometry (legs) is a nice breaker on the bottom, using the straight line of the couch to cut the scene in half and maintain the continuum.

My only nit-pick is the way you captured her face, as if smelling the sweat of her armpits. Not very feminine, i say ...


fantastic shot.you are the best.

Very good control of lighting and placement of model. Very strong image......

so long legs.. wonderfull idea.. compo.. really good shot!

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 697 W: 36 N: 423] (3851)
  • [2007-05-14 0:21]

Abstract & well present life infinitely.


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  • AKF Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 156 W: 12 N: 62] (421)
  • [2007-05-27 23:43]

One of my favorite photos of yours. What I don't understand specifically is what you are trying to say with "a model's life"? I like the grainy effect you have in this photo, especially the miniature her in a frame above her head. You did that in one of your first photos and though the idea is incredibly artistic I think it turned out better here. Probably because of the triangle ceiling and the pose of the model, it all fits better; a kind of symmetry.

Great work :D:D


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