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Copyright: Erik Sven (ErikSven) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 156 N: 558] (3098)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2012-06-27
Categories: Mood
Camera: Canon EOS 550D, Canon EF-S 15-85mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/320 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2012-07-16 12:00
Viewed: 1622
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
No post-processing, except for a slight level adjustment (enhancing the bright tones).
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To john1: flou à l'arrière-planErikSven 1 08-03 02:06
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I like the mood you have caught in this floral posting, Erik!

Good use of shallow DOF and focus you have maintained on the flowers (in FG).
The light and exposure are very well handled, and the blurred flowers in BG also add to the overall appeal of the scene. The structure at far adds graphism in the picture.

Thanks and regards,

very good play with the composition and the sharpness/unsharpness. I could imagine a b&w version as well.

Boa Noite Niek,
It bothers me a little abrupt transition zone for a good sharpening a blurred background. The same with the halfway house. I consider a wonder the FP.

I like the simplicity of this shot and the minimal colour. I am sure that you placed the building in the centre of the shot deliberately but I feel it would have worked better if the building had been more to the right because of the slope of the roof. This is just my opinion though. I think this would be an interesting image in b/w.


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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1816 W: 39 N: 465] (4859)
  • [2012-07-31 5:18]

Bonjour Erik,

Now this is an aesthetic presentation. Details in the front row is interesting, still the eye goes back to the blurry site and doesn't mind blur, rather leaves an interesting impact. A wonderful image, well done. Thanks for sharing.

Kind Regards,

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2012-07-31 6:36]


tu as tout a fair raison cette iamge n'est pas une grande résussite, mais voilà j'aime ces vieux c^raccard, et je suis à conbtre jiur, aux grisons il y en a aussi mais avec les toits de pierre et nois en bois, le gens constuisaient les chalet avec la matière qu'ils touvait sur plage.
super compo de ce fkeur avec la cabane en flou en fond fantastique.

Bravo et amitié


Bonjour Erik,
Un beau point de vue avec une profondeur de champs en avant scène et un arrière-plant flou,
J'aime bien ce champs avec ces jolies fleurs blanches et sa joli verdure,
bel endroit et jolie scène rurale,
Mes salutations et amicalement ,

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  • john1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 438 W: 0 N: 886] (8448)
  • [2012-08-02 11:06]
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Bonjour Erik,

Un jolis point de vue, le flou du B/G est voulu?
Le cadrage est magnifique, un super shot technique je trouve.
Merci pour le partage.

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