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until the night train


until the night train
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Copyright: JeanPaul Rollet (saparot) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 160 W: 55 N: 124] (4673)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-11-09
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon EOS 5D, Canon EF 24-105 f/4L IS USM
Exposure: f/4, 1/15 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-04-29 12:47
Viewed: 2087
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Photo taken on the wharf awaiting the Aswan overnight train to Cairo ...


Mon Amie La Rose
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For a snapshot - which I would have to say it is, a quickly-taken shot under uncontrolled circumstances - this is good. Perspective is well used and the vanishing point well placed.

The smiling figure in the foreground looks somehow unreal - like a ghost. A smiling, happy ghost. :)

Rew

Bonjour Jean-Paul,

J'aime bien, l'athmosphère est bien captée. Mais je trouve que l'angle est peut-être un peu trop grand, entre la publicité en haut et le personnage, on ne sait pas trop ce qu'il faut regarder.

Amicalement,
Olivier

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