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Couleurs nocturnes


Couleurs nocturnes
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Copyright: Urs Achermann (urs0114) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 672 W: 66 N: 939] (6799)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-25
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture
Camera: Sony DSC-R1, Carl Zeiss Vario-Sonnar T* 24-120 mm, Raw/Tiff
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/8 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-11-28 6:53
Viewed: 2504
Points: 85
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Valence, illumination de la salle des fêtes de l'Hôtel Arénas.

Appareil photo posé au sol.
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Good night shot in yours picture.
Nice well and good details of photo.
Best regards.Alin.

Hi Urs
excellent night shot.
clear and sharp details.
beautiful lit fountain.
marvelous colors on dark bg.
greetings
tsilla

Hello, Urs -
Excellent nocturnal image - the fountain really captures the light from beneath; very sharp details despite the low light. The stone paving in the foreground adds a nice graphic element. Very nice work.

Hello Urs!
Nice your point of view and very beautiful night picture! A bit OE, but still wonderful!
Great colours!
Best regards!
Lili

Hello Urs! Very interesting night shot. Good colours. Very good light and shadow, perfect contrast. Original architecture. Amazing frame. Well done!

Ciao Urs, splendid nocturne shoot, excellent exposure, fantastic light, very well done, ciao Silvio

Bonsoir Urs,
Une complaisante image plus que parfaite.
Les couleurs nocturnes sont féériques.
Une capture joliment cadrée et encadrée.
Mes compliments , avec toi c'est toujours le rêve. Chapeau l'artiste.
Belle soirée.

Yolande.

Bonjour Urs
Impressive nocturnal shot
Amazing sharpness, light and colors
Great architectural details and presentation
Have a nice weekend
BURAK

Hello Urs

amazing night scenery
the lights and sharpness are outstanding
excellent realization and POV
i like the low angle
Have a beautiful weekend!
Oana

Hi Urs,
Very beautiful nocturnal shot vith very nice sharpnes and lighting.TFS.
Amical bonsoir,

hAyAti

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  • isa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 385 W: 62 N: 139] (1593)
  • [2009-11-28 14:19]

Hi Dear Urs,
Great nocturnal, beuatiful definition and light. Perfectly tecnique, the fountain its beautiful. LOvely place.
Congratulations for the perfectly composition.
Have a nice we.
Isa

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 73 N: 86] (20294)
  • [2009-11-28 21:39]

dear Urs,
beautiful night shot,
lighted water looks so fantastic,
and back palace and palm trees are very fine too,
this whole ambience is so warm and cheerful, in spite of back darkness.
thank you for your wonderful shot,
Akihisa

Urs
Une maitrise technique quasi parfaite pour cette photo nocturne (peut-être quelques zones un peu surex dans la fontaine?)et une composition très bien vue avec ce jet d'eau placé pile poil où il faut.Sans trépied, chapeau!
Amicalement
JJ

Hello,
Magnificent shot!
Great architecture, fantastic lights.
Lovely composition of the photo.
TFS

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  • JT50 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 273 W: 6 N: 320] (1524)
  • [2009-11-29 7:48]

Hi Urs,
A very impressive excellent night shot. Sharp details. Lovely illuminated foreground
which makes this image even more attractive. Dark background is perfect for this shot.
Framing absolutely suits the capture.
Have a nice evening.
Jank

Hi Urs,

Stunning night shot and artistic presentation from wonderful POV with great colours and delightful composition.
TFS and have a nice new week!
Cheers,

Bayram

Hello Urs,
A warm nocturnal image. The low light has a tropical romantic feel with the palm trees providing balance. The greens on the building provide good contrast, the f/g is attractive. best regards.
Danilo

Boa noite Urs
Almost perfect this nocturne capture and very well framed.
Um abraço
teresa

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2009-11-30 4:03]

Hello Urs,

merveilleus vue nocturne quelle maîtrise des tons et des lumières, la fondaitne fait une grandisoe effet.

Bravo et amitié

Nicou

Ciao Urs


Three elements in these lovely wonderful picture.
The enlightenment of the picture generally.
Reflections of warm lights in the street and the
Architecture is simply fabulous!
Nice composed and captured.
Very well done my friend ...

Sergio

Buena imagen de Valencia " la ciudad de la luz " bien captada en este nocturno con buen color y detalle
Buen trabajo
un saludo

Bonjour Urs,

Very good night photo.
Beautiful composition and architectural details.
Excellent POV and light.

Best regards,
Tatjana

Hello Urs,
Well captured night scene, clear image and crisp details. I think you've used a tripod.
Excellent...
TFS
Selahattin E

excellent pov and composition wonderful colours and sharpness
Nice work
warm regards
David

Bonjour Urs,
Superbe prise de vue nocturne,
Excellent point de vue et composition.
très belle architecture et présentation,
belle netteté et lumière.
excellent contraste aussi.
tous mes compliments
Michel...

Hello Urs,

This is one amazing shot. Everything is working so well with each other. Night time shots are quite tough but u have managed to get everything work well with each other so nicely. I really like the low POV and the over all Orangeish tone created i think by the street lights around the place. Nice sharp focused image with a great dreamy effect on the fountain created by the long exposure i guess. It adds so much to the over all mood of the pic. Really nice work Urs.

TFS and keep clicking...

Hi Urs!
Wonderful night shot!
Beautiful fountain.
Greetings
Tadeusz

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27563)
  • [2009-12-01 12:39]

Hi Urs,
beautiful night view.Perfect clarity and composition.Beautiful light and colours.TFS.Necla.

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  • kanton Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 854 W: 5 N: 1570] (6756)
  • [2009-12-01 13:37]

Salut Urs !
What an interesting night shot!
Great warm lighting,colours and
sharp details!Nice architecture
and a beautiful fountain!
Regards and tfs
Kostas

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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 47 N: 1333] (7051)
  • [2009-12-01 14:28]

Bonsoir Urs!
Marvellous image of Valence by night.
Amazing lighting and sharpness with superb details.
Excellent work, as usual:-)) Congratulations.
Ciao! Vanda

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 13 N: 1404] (6384)
  • [2009-12-01 14:37]

Hi Urs,
Stunning nocturnal shot, great colours and PoV with this, nice misty effect with the fountain from the long exposure. TFS
Bri

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Salut Urs, Projectile nocturne renversant, grandes couleurs et POV avec ceci, effet brumeux gentil avec la fontaine de la longue exposition. TFS
Bri

I'm going to go against all the little green smiley dollars here Urs and give a proper critique as I do..

I feel that the subject of the fountain is too central - there's an interestingly lit building to the right and a few boring streetlights to the left.. I would definitely have rotated the camera more to the right making the fountain occupy the left 1/3rd of the frame and included more of that building..
Also the black sky is a little boring - either try and shoot 'blue hour' for a little colour or just crop to a panoramic format. That brings me to the third part of my critique - the paving stones are out of focus (well the nearer ones) because of the wider aperture. So crop those too and there's a panoramic view..

Definitely this scene has a lot of potential, but I don't think this is quite to your normal standard..

Cheers
DAvid

Hello Urs,
Wonderful night shot with great light, colors and sharpness.
Nicely executed and exposed.
Yopie

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1250 W: 106 N: 2911] (22323)
  • [2009-12-02 4:44]

Hi Urs,
Wonderful night shot. Great color tones, nice strong image of a beautiful place. I love it ! TFS Julie

Olá Urs

Uma bela foto noturna...belo jogo
de cores e luzes. Linda composição.
Um trabalho nota 10!
Parabéns
GA
Vera

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 897 W: 0 N: 1845] (8705)
  • [2009-12-02 15:00]

Bonsoir Urs,
Couleur nocturne exceptionnelle. Super clarté et de détails, félicitations.
Une belle nuit,
Adrian

Bonjour Urs

Très bonne qualité d'image pour cette photo nocturne.
J'admire.... je suis trop nulle en photo de nuit.
Ces tons orangés se marient très bien avec la nuit.
La touche verte des fenêtres lumineuses est le détail qui fait toute la différence.
Parfaitement pensé. Du grand et beau travail.

Merci de partager ce conseil de poser l'apapreil au sol, moi qui croit qu'il faut toujours un trépied.

Amicalement.

Bonjour Urs,

Sorry, missed this one!

I just love the harmony of colors in this capture. Perfect in terms of sharpness, POV, the centered placing of fountains was indeed a wonderful idea. It seems that "World is gold-colored".

Marvelous job!

best regards,
Paras

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124)
  • [2009-12-03 4:11]

Salut Urs

Superb motion blur of the water plumes of the fountain in this outstanding nocturnal shot. Good sharpness & light contrasts with superb colour. Tfs!

Hi Urs!
lovely night shot with the right exposure! nice composition from a low angled pov... i like the softness on the water...
tfs
best regards,
Alper

Hello Urs Acherman.
It's a great image with a depth of field and sharpness very good. My congratulations.
It's easy to say when an image is ta check, but if you let me give another perspective, I would have gone a little more left, so you can set and raise the building to the left of the image and in turn put another building entirely to the right of the image, but that takes nothing of merit to your image.
Greetings. Javier. Saavedra.

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2538 W: 70 N: 4788] (22221)
  • [2009-12-25 6:16]

Hi Urs...

Beautiful night action scene, indeed view..!
Excellently done - fantastic details, sharpness and colors.
Best regards,
George

Simply wonderful! Excellent! Felicitations!

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