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Vervet Monkey in Portrait


Vervet Monkey in Portrait
Photo Information
Copyright: David Boswell (jamfest) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 576 W: 23 N: 529] (4243)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-10-07
Categories: Nature, Portrait
Camera: Canon 5D, Canon 100-400/4.5-5.6L IS
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-12-05 12:11
Viewed: 2811
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A vervet monkey, taken at Tarangire National Park, in Tanzania.

PP:
-shot in RAW
-initial adjustments of exposure, recovery, fill, and blacks done in Lightroom
-increased contrast slightly using the curves graph in Lightroom
-increased vibrancy by about 20% in Lightroom
-sharpened and adjusted levels in CS3

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Hello David!
Lovely monkey portrait!
Good focus, nice detail and clarity!
Beautiful point of view!
Best regards!
Lili

Excellent long zoom work here David.
Amazing clarity and sharpness for such a long shot.
Great natural color too, well done!

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1929 W: 117 N: 3017] (13240)
  • [2008-12-06 10:04]

Hello David
Amazing detail, light and colours. Great capture of a wonderful creature.
Congrats, mb

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  • Zeperix Gold Star Critiquer [C: 136 W: 4 N: 116] (1069)
  • [2008-12-09 20:30]

A great shot. I like how you got some light into the eyes - they just need catchlights. Without them the eyes are flat. Good composition.

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  • aperis Gold Star Critiquer [C: 81 W: 5 N: 31] (1159)
  • [2008-12-13 10:38]

Hi David,
Excelent picture. Composition, sharp, ligth and detail are great.
Congratulations,
Amadeu

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665)
  • [2008-12-13 19:07]

hello David

Nice close up shot of the monkey with good bokeh. The sharpness here is important especially on the face because it will help to show the eyes although it would be fantastic to have the eyes looking into the lens.

The monkey face itself with the dark color to contrast with the body hair in milky tone can generate very good appeal.

Good portrait shot.

tfs, bill

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1250 W: 106 N: 2911] (22323)
  • [2008-12-30 8:47]

Hi David,
Very cute- excellent details and great clarity. Good expression caught !
Happy Holidays,
Julie

He is my fast friend. Thank you very much for his beautiful portrait.

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