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Photo Information
Copyright: Meity Heesbeen (meity) (78)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-05-23
Categories: Food
Camera: Canon 300D
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/5 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-06-02 14:02
Viewed: 1420
Points: 9
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Dutch]
With this picture I'd like to give an impression of an old-fashioned kitchen.
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  • aran Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 123 W: 21 N: 19] (396)
  • [2005-06-03 12:20]

Hi, and you do. I like old pieces of instruments and furniture. the B&W is perfect for it. I like the angle you chose and the reflexation of the floor on it. I provides contrast and simetry.Good eye!

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  • sephus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 254 W: 0 N: 96] (4261)
  • [2005-06-03 13:05]

Hoi Meity,
welkom bij de club.
Ik zag net pas, dat je begonnen bent. Ik reageer meteen maar op de foto, die ik van de drie het mooist vind.
De wijzerplaat mooi in een kwadrant genomen (of gesneden). leuk in z/w, de reflectie van de keukenvloer heel leuk in de schaal. Wij hebben overigens hetzelfde motief in laminaat.
De flessen mooi vaag.
Goed begin!!
We moeten niet op elke foto van elkaar gaan reageren, hoor!
Dan wordt het zo'n "verplichte" toestand. Ik volg je wel.
Een vriend van Richard doet sinds een paar weken ook mee. Zijn gebr. naam is ruudblok.
Heel mooi!!
Mijn eerste twee punten voor jou.

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  • wayne Gold Star Critiquer [C: 292 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-06-03 23:40]
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Meity, I like the b/w quality of this. However, I don't get the impression you are trying to convey. It is difficult to sum up such a broad subject in a singular image, though I do see this as part of a series. Also, the scale itself does not mean anything to the average person who knows nothing about scales. That could be a scale in a butcher shop for all I know. It doesn't tell me that we are in a kitchen and that it is an old-fashioned scale in an old-fashioned kitchen. Try to include more information. Assume that we have no idea what a kitchen of this looks like.

I believe you do a good job of capturing the look you are trying for. I like the framing, it's very original and it's close up. You are going more for a feeling than a shot of a scale. Good job, thanks for sharing with us.

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  • torr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 384 W: 50 N: 81] (1767)
  • [2005-08-09 14:36]

stronge picture!!!
Pitty there is not that bit more "room" on the right upper side.
Love the scene.
And imagine that thers shots are amasing difficelt.
See you on planet tl.

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