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Koochi-Koochi, two years after

Koochi-Koochi, two years after
Photo Information
Copyright: Alfredo Valiente (Penpen) Silver Note Writer [C: 7 W: 0 N: 16] (192)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-23
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/2.5, 1/80 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Kids from the World Part III [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-10-30 14:48
Viewed: 1955
Points: 0
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Koochi-Koochi, the little girl in B&W photo, now 3 years old. This was suppose to be a stolen shot but she was too quick to glanced at the camera.
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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2572 W: 237 N: 6132] (24044)
  • [2007-11-01 6:59]

Superb composition, outstanding expression: very wistful and sweet.

This is a very sweet capture, although it is rather soft. A much longer dof would work much better here. f/2.5 is simply much too shallow. I would try for something above f/5.6 next time.
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