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La Defence

La Defence
Photo Information
Copyright: Rob Zwemmer (alvaraalto) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 144 W: 53 N: 192] (1428)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2001-10
Categories: Architecture, Mood
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-02-23 18:55
Viewed: 2120
Points: 9
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
La Defende, the modern business quartier of Paris in a very special mood.
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i like this but there is noise but i like how you lined them up in the shot, and how you made the photograph a piece of abstract art and not just a photograph , cause they are two different things :)

good job

very nice photo and good colors too... but my opinion will be on the vertical composition of this photo.. this are very tall buildings, right? maybe you should not crop until so 'square' ..try to capture more vertical or height of the building..

anyway, nice works on the pp too.. tfs...

I presume you used either a high speed film or set a high ISO code of at least 1200 (if digital) in order to see the grain on the picture. But the composition is nice, very modern, with lines in harmony.
Good shot

bonjour Rob. Je trouve dans cette photo une atmosphère géniale, le bleu est beau, la perspective donnée par les tours est attirante. La granulation, enfin je pense, donne un plus à la façon dont je vois cette photo.
goedendag Rob. Ik vind in deze foto een géniale atmosfeer, blauw is mooi, het vooruitzicht dat door de omloop wordt gegeven, is aantrekkelijk. De granulatie, tenslotte denk ik, geef een meer aan de wijze waarop ik deze foto zie.

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  • Miqra Gold Star Critiquer [C: 865 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-02-24 13:36]

Un ussual color but it works exceptionally well here, excellent shot, well done!

I really like your compo and its colors despite the noise. But did you take it from ? Are there the original colors ?

Ciao Rob,

Sem dúvida a arquitetura é arrojada,
os predios tem bonita beleza no visual
tem bonito abstrato, mas o filtro ficou um pouco forte
e pin precisa ser afiado.


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