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Time for a look ...
Photo Information
Copyright: JeanPaul Rollet (saparot) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 160 W: 55 N: 124] (4673)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-10-06
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 5D, Canon EF 24-105 f/4L IS USM
Exposure: f/4, 1/60 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2012-02-06 14:37
Viewed: 1663
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Editing test CS5
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It's a nice "high key" image. Solid blacks, and high on it's limits without getting too hot. Excellent sharpness and exposure.

Little problems with the mid-tones tho. The choice of background don't necessarely help either, but that's my personnel opinion. I would have gone for a more suttle background, and letting it see thru the sweeter, I find a little disturbing. The stream of hair, on the left side, is on it's own, lake contrast. I can't really tell you why, but kind of melt or washout with the back ground. Then again taking attention that it shouldn't. I like to look at an image, that is together, not broken in many pieces...which this image kind of suggest to me.

Pass my personnel interest...a nice image.

Hi JeanPaul,
Great pose that is well captured. The expression you've captured works perfectly with the slightly over-exposed skin. A great choice for black and white. Well done!


Olá Jean
beautiful portrait with an interesting work...her espression is precious.
um abraço

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