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wedding 1


wedding 1
Photo Information
Copyright: leeno shilla (leeno) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 41] (725)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2016-02-03
Categories: Event
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2016-02-04 9:24
Viewed: 1099
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Yesterday I got the oppurtunity to take this weeding photo of my niece.
I have crop and frame but no other editing. Taking in priority mode with iso setting adjusted to 800

Leeno
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Hi Leeno

This photo is all about the bride and groom, but your frame distracts the attention from them. The dress is over exposed and some detail has been lost. The image is nice and sharp, but perhaps a little softness could have been added to the brides face.
Good exposure, depth of field and focus.

I hope you don't mind but I've done a workshop.

Hi Leeno,

I think I agree a little bit with Bob, especially about the frame. And I also liked the lights he has added in the eyes of bride and groom in the workshop he made for you, it makes them more lively and happy!
A bit of a pity you cut her hands and the flowers but the whole image looks nice...

Greetings - Viviane

Hello.
I like the Monalisa expression on the bride
so i did an workshop highlighting her.
Greetings.

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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 793 W: 26 N: 808] (9649)
  • [2016-02-06 15:18]

Hi Leeno,
A lovely picture of the bride and groom, I think Bob's WS has added to overall image
Cheers
Jack

Hi Leeno,
The frame is a real distraction and the subjects are slightly over exposed.
erwin...

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