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Copyright: Vidya Aravind (vidya) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 49 W: 0 N: 18] (303)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-01-02
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2011-03-03 6:08
Viewed: 1306
Points: 2
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I clicked this flower at kerala at a flower shop....
i JUST READ THE below poem on an webpage ......
Thank u Marcella Debrito
There was once a beautiful flower sitting in the meadow
while I got out of my bed to my window
the field was very beautiful and grassy
the beautiful flower was feeling sassy
as it stand tall above all of the flowers in the meadow
I wanted to get something to drink so I left the window
the beautiful flower try to look for me
the beautiful wanted to see
me at the window looking at the flowers beauty and grace
but there was a sad look on her face
when I came back with with a drink of water
the beautiful flower felt better
the beautiful flower posed and danced
but I did not glanced
then I looked down and saw another beautiful flower
the first flower was a sunflower
and the second flower was pink with a green in the middle
the second beautiful flower started to fiddle
the first beautiful flower got so mad she grabed her
and threw the second flower further
from the meadowly field of the uncool flowers
but the rain shower
it was coming in 5 minutes and the beautiful flower was sad
but I looked down with a smile and she was glad
then the rain started the flower went home to her friend

Marcella Debrito

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A wonderful image! I really like your chosen POV and the colors are gorgeous! Worth two points, so they only get better with all my admiration.
Best regards

Splendid capture.I like the water droplets,adding feeling of freshness.

Hi, Vidya. Beautiful flower captured with lovely saturated redddish hue and a very nice poem. Flowers do inspire us and make our world pretty. The POV is good and the tiny droplets add freshness. I did a workshop please look at it to see my version. cheers

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