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my cat
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Copyright: Mustafa YAPICI (milas) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2841 W: 398 N: 3076] (34114)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-07-14
Categories: Transportation
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-07-14 11:22
Viewed: 2392
Points: 26
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My cat....


Kedim...
Kedim henüz bir yaşında;
Uyur hep soba başında.
Hem cesurdur, hem de kurnaz.
Bir tıkırtı duyar duymaz.
Uyanır, aslan kesilir;
Gözleri volkan kesilir.
O geldiği günden beri
Bizim evin fareleri
Damdan, tavandan indiler,
Birer deliğe sindiler.
Koşup yakalıyor hemen
Yuvasından, deliğinden
Çıkanları diri diri.
Artık bunlardan hiç biri
Dolaplarıma girmiyor,
Kitapları kemirmiyor.

Halit Fahri Ozansoy

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27563)
  • [2010-07-14 11:34]
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Merhaba Mustafa bey'
ne guzel bir kediniz var'adini yazmamissiniz..Bir sey olsa kedinin cigere baktigi gibi denir.Kedinin baliga bakmasi da farkli degil galiba.Siir de cok guzel.Meryem bu siiri cok sevmistir eminim.Akvaryumda baliklari boyle net cekmek cok zor.Ben basaramadim.Tebrikler.Kedinizin bakisini iyi yakalamissiniz.Cercevede farkli olmus bu sefer.Tebrikler.Necla.

Merhaba Mustafa Bey,
A beautiful shot with cute pose of your cat while keenly observing the the little friends,here the exposure is very well accurate to get everything well in focused and details there is no unwanted reflection on the surface of the glass jar and the details inside the jar is too clear while maintained the same sharpness and details out side as well.

Best Wishes
Mushtaq

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1474 W: 0 N: 4177] (21534)
  • [2010-07-14 13:07]

Merhaba Mustafa :)

Kitten is pretty and fish also :)
Interesting composition...look after fish cat...haha!!!
Very pretty, natural colours, light and sharpness.
Very showy composition.

With best wishes.
Barbara

Merhaba,Mustapha.güzel renkler, ışık ve güzel bir hikaye ile kompozisyon iyi. Daima work.creative fikir hayran iyi repesented. tebrikler.

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6102 W: 174 N: 1935] (7534)
  • [2010-07-14 13:57]

Ciao Mustafa


Poor cat, it only remains to look at the beautiful
fishes. a beautiful photograph, clean
and well defined.
Sharpness and clarity are very nice, soft and fine image.
Excellent composition, lovely presentation.

Sergio

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2010-07-14 23:30]

Hello,

va-til résussir à l'attraper, superbe compo et iamge de ce chat, avec le poisson rouge et le noir, le beau rond du bocal, quel regard et attitude ce chat, comme il admire ces poissons, très belle iamge viviante et agréable.

Bravo et maitié

Nicou

Merhaba Mustafa Bey,
Çok güzel ve sevimli bir kare olmuş.Ked, balık derken Allah bilir kuşunuzda vardır sanırım.Meryem'in küçük dostları..
Selamlarımla..

hAyAti

Merhaba Mustafa Üstad,

The cat attention towards the fishes concerned me and I hope the fishes managed to survived... :)

Nice and interesting idea and well presented. The sharpness and POV are nice and clarity is well done.

best greetings,
Paras

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1250 W: 106 N: 2911] (22323)
  • [2010-07-21 7:17]

Hi Mustafa
Very funny and natural picture of your cat. Nicely composed with excellent natural colors, good clarity and sharpness. Well done my friend, TFS Julie

Very nice capture of this beautiful scene (what did the cat do?). Great pov and dof with sharp details. Nice colors. Well done, tfs.

Umarım sadece izliyordur:) Bide ötürmeye çalışırsa vay balıkların haline:)
Çok güzel pozda yakalamışsınız Mustafa bey!
Selam ve sevgiler.

bayram

ciao Mustafa..
too cool.. the perfect idea to describe cats spirit.. always attracted by moviments and hunting in every moment!
great compo!
thanks
ciao Marco

Hello my dear brother Mustafa,

Lovely cat with the fishes.
Beautiful composition and nice frame.
Selamlar

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