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sokak lambasi ve kedi

sokak lambasi ve kedi
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Copyright: muslum yasargun (pele-pele) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 0 N: 0] (978)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10-03
Categories: Abstract
Exposure: f/8, 1/4000 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-10-06 6:24
Viewed: 1546
Points: 8
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Hello Muslum,
I like how you achieve to evoke an entire atmosphere only by playing with some silhouettes, with light and shadow.
Timing is perfect, with the placement of the cat (and its shadow) adding to the mysterious mood.
I just wouldn't have put the two black borders. Especially the upper border does your composition no good. Sometimes, you have to keep it simple. Your photo suffices on its own ;o).
TFS & kind regards,

  • Tanjicka Gold Star Critiquer [C: 871 W: 0 N: 807] (4207)
  • [2009-10-06 11:25]

Merhaba Muslum,

Excelletn shot.
Interesting composition with some silhouettes and shadows. Great light tones.

Best regards,

P. S. Sorry, out of my point - budget today :( Hope you won't mind.

I like the light/shadow and composition.

A Photographer's Note would be nice!


Boa noite Muslum ( pele-pele)
The atmosphere is fantastic...there are so many stories aboiut black cats...scare...or not'
Thanks for the suggestion ambience.
My regards

Interesting composition, Muslum!
I think that with a little more of sharpness could be better. So I maked a workshop. I hope you like.

  • Great 
  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 2110 W: 41 N: 0] (15189)
  • [2009-10-06 23:16]

Merhaba my friend...
Where you are ????
Beautiful shot with so nice shodows...
Beautiful work...

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