To bobsmith: First Autumn ColourRSK::2013-10-09 16:49
Hi Robert,to my eye,reversing this scene, improved the composition from its original,which I felt was too unbalanced,I also found that the right hand grasses & the lighter strip of green to the left,were both leading lines, that help draw my eye,into the centre of this composition,while the lines of the darker green grasses led my eye to the trees & to the left side of the composition.This is just my opinion & differs from your own,which is allowed,as critiquing is a very subjective action.With the subjects the photographer had to work with,I thought he presented an interesting composition. I took the liberty to change things to what I thought you might have preferred the composition to be,of course it meant using more PP work than Vladimir perhaps wanted to be used.....Ron Czech Republic
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To bobsmith: First Autumn Colour RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1089 W: 589 N: 1943] (14753)::2013-10-09 16:49