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Copyright: Afshin Memarian (pix) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 42 W: 0 N: 0] (1027)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-12-26
Categories: Nature
Camera: nikon coolpix 4500
Exposure: f/2.6, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-01-05 4:19
Viewed: 2556
Points: 30
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Tehran, 05 Dey 1384
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  • Great 
  • monks Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 48 W: 0 N: 21] (206)
  • [2006-01-05 4:27]

Hey Afshin
You have shot a beautiful dark cloudy. I love the colours, like the sun colours between the Big cloud and the city. Your photo is very clear, i can see the builds very well.(good)
Excellent job
later monika

Interesting. three-layered with a 'horizon' where it should be. Black and orange looks really good and the flat lighting on the buildings gives it a different 'feel'.
Good one. 8/10.

  • Great 
  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1153 W: 70 N: 1116] (16)
  • [2006-01-05 5:21]
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Beautiful shot.I love dark clouds. Have a nice weekend.

Hi Afshin,
It's really very well done.

Incredible sky you've captured here. Compositionally you've done well to give it most of the frame. I look at this photo and think if you had told me the world was on fire I would have believed you.

  • Great 
  • hojper Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 680 W: 110 N: 849] (4090)
  • [2006-01-06 10:57]

There is a perfect sense of balance and composition to this photo. You show exactly enough of the city and enough (a lot) of the sky to create a terrific atmosphere. It is not important whether this is about fire or sunset or thunderstorm, but it is a beautiful image full of depth and tension. But nevertheless it would be nice with a note on how and why you did this.

  • Great 
  • OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 156 W: 70 N: 330] (2387)
  • [2006-01-07 6:57]

This is one dramatic scenery shot. The sky/clouds: magnificent. The compostion is good with the horizon in the postion where it should be.
Can't help thinking that the city of tehran is on fire here. Let's hope this apocalyptic thought is just that, a thought.

Shahre Makhof! merc

Nice shot. A large dark sky and an horizon "on fire". Nice contrast and well done.

  • Great 
  • manibj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 104 W: 171 N: 61] (1824)
  • [2006-01-13 12:02]

zibast, rooz maroofe tehran [rooze havaye pak] ;)

  • Great 
  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1206 W: 151 N: 655] (8171)
  • [2006-01-24 8:22]

ola afshin!
um ceu que mete medo mas de grande beleza!
as cores sao fortes e ajudam muito a dar beleza composicao.
bom trabalho!
Points tomorrow.

  • Great 
  • btokaz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1049 W: 127 N: 167] (5744)
  • [2006-01-28 11:06]

Very nice shot Afshin! Great atmosphere...

Really dramatic shot. The sky and horizon look so menacing.
Thanks for sharing

a very nice and touchable shot of a cloudy day.

almost surreal! Very nice composition and well color management.

Salam Ostad
IT's a super shot . Always I think to this problem when I will be able to take this genre photo as you do !
Stay in touch and thanks for sharing

Hi Afshin,

Wonderful sky, beautiful composition with grat POV and lighting.
Congratulations and TFS

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