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Shock of Generations

Shock of Generations
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Copyright: Jose Rendeiro (jrendeiro) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 333 W: 4 N: 155] (2317)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-12-17
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Olympus C-5050Z
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-12-28 7:23
Viewed: 2458
Points: 36
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Portuguese]
To more early have children (for return of the 22-27 years and in first or 2.º year of marriage), is not only estatisticamente proven who make the marriages will last more (forever...), for the concerns and the familiar relations that if establish since soon, but also will allow not to provoke "shock of generations in such a way", since the parents will be able to share with the children of a more alive form its proper "youthful culture" and to use this allotment to deepen the relations between parents and children, in a common starting point, of mutual discovery, as friends. When it happens that the parents already completely are installed in its professional life, tend to face youth as a "freight" and something "to chain" to its will... They do not want them to leave to make a mistake and therefore they restrict the movements to them. But thus none of them has chance to grow: the parents must, in my opinion, to gradually partilhar its privacies with the children and to show to them that its opinions matter, but that the parents are that they are the responsible ones and the word of them are the end. Thus, youth in the family is always a chance of growth and rejuvenescimento, of discovery of that plus that member of the family it comes to bring!
Thanks to my son Peter and my friend António (Limassol), who was my models for this picture.

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What an excellent photo! Great concept, marvellous execution. I don't know if you meant it or it was an accident, but there is one shadow cast from 2 people. An interesting symbolism, wouldn't you say? :)

Good job!

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  • tet Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 373 W: 39 N: 196] (3627)
  • [2005-12-28 7:51]

Fantastic Jose! I like the contrast and the mood!
The shadow is fine for me. It's odd to remove that.


Composition great. People and horizon in perfect place to give maximum impact.

excellent composition jose
beautiful colors and details, i like the mood here

Gosto muito! Todo o enquadramento está excepcional!

Abraço e votos de um excelente Ano Novo, cheio de felicidade e muitas fotos :D


Looking in different directions, yet still close together. I liked Chris' comment about the single shadow.

Marvelous, simple composition, and great quality. I appreciate your note, as well, Jose!

Gayle :)

Excellent placement of the persons,I like the graphic appeal too.

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6102 W: 174 N: 1935] (7534)
  • [2005-12-28 14:34]

Belíssima fotografia José.
Está maravilhosa, o seu texto é perfeito para a foto.
Grandes os modelos, que te ajudarm a passar este texto como o retrato da vida como ela é.
Maravilhosa fotografia.


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  • rui Gold Star Critiquer [C: 279 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-12-28 18:51]

Olá compadre !
Grande foto / Grande nota !
Muito bom trabalho !
Aquele abração,

Fabulosa!! Parabéns!! Bom Ano de 2006. bjs

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  • Helena (0)
  • [2005-12-30 19:09]

Olá Zé Tó !
Gostei da tua anotação, concordo com tudo !
Gostei da sombra, pegadas e da luz...
Bom ano para vocês !
Beiinhos, Lena

Simplesmente genial... Tudo desde a foto a nota...


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  • OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 156 W: 70 N: 330] (2387)
  • [2005-12-31 11:27]

Simple concept but working to the benefit of the whole photo. Like it! The single shadow is quite interesting.
Best wishes,

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1206 W: 151 N: 655] (8171)
  • [2006-01-02 15:14]

ola Jose!
a foto està muito bem conseguida. simples, mas com uma carga simbolica excepcional.o texto que acompanha està à mesma altura.
Bom trabalho!

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  • Eden Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 167 W: 50 N: 86] (2084)
  • [2006-01-04 2:29]

this photo is just brilliant. well composed and with an interesting theme but there again, all of your captures are excellent,...TFS..martha

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  • diana Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 208 W: 24 N: 94] (1115)
  • [2006-01-05 9:21]

Olá José!
Esta composição está excelente! A distribuição dos corpos contrastantes está muito boa, tudo em redor trabalha para o bom funcionamento da foto! Excelente!!


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great job Jose ficou excelente.

Excellente interprétation!
Bon W-e.

  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 3811 W: 2520 N: 16] (72)
  • [2010-03-02 14:50]

Hello Jose,

Excellent title and composition with great POV and off-center position of the subjects.
Very well done and framed.
Congratulations and TFS

(*) Sorry, but I haven't more smiles today.

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