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Copyright: Hamid Sedghinejad (h_sedghi) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 69 W: 10 N: 3] (540)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon PowerShot G5
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-12-14 10:10
Viewed: 4379
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 64
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are we twin?
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To kitflorendo: Hi friendh_sedghi 1 01-24 04:06
To kitflorendo: hi friendh_sedghi 2 12-15 10:40
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  • Needs Improvement 
  • c3101 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 156 W: 0 N: 93] (1250)
  • [2005-12-14 10:16]
  • [+]

Beautiful colours in your picture, but I feel the subject matter is just too central in this image, and not quite taking up most of the available space, leaving a lot of dead room around the flowers distracting from the final image.
If you still can, go and photograph them again.

  • Great 
  • tet Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 373 W: 39 N: 196] (3627)
  • [2005-12-14 10:16]

nice one hamid! like the depth of the bg!

There is a great shot contained here. Needs just a little work to extract it.
Would you like to see an amended version?

Hi Hamid,
Great shot. A very scenery photo. Is it Demavend by the way.
Regards,
Mohammadreza

I like the way you made these two flowers stand out. You probably should have worked a little on the background. I am curious as to what kitflorendo will do.
Good shot & POV,
Thanks for sharing.
Randy

Beautiful quality in the 2 poppies Hamid but they are too central. I think the camera should have been turned the other way to give a portrait frame so that more of the stems-possibly the whole plant- was visible. It doesn't look quite right with 2 stems just sticking up from the bottom of the frame.
Barry

  • Great 
  • twin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 350 W: 105 N: 198] (7374)
  • [2005-12-14 11:39]

heeeyyy ... this is my nick... :)))
nice composition, and beautiful expression...
good shot..
congratulations hamid...

  • Great 
  • Mistery (327)
  • [2005-12-14 12:05]

PiÍkne zdjÍcie!!!

  • Great 
  • MeAT Silver Star Critiquer [C: 14 W: 7 N: 2] (34)
  • [2005-12-15 1:13]

The red flowers in the background are well captured and add to the picture. I would have liked to see that shot looking down a bit. I think it would have emphasized on the nicer part of the background.

Apart from the flowers being a bit too central, this is absolutely stunning. The depth of field is perfect. The colours amazing. Really made me happy to see this shot. One of my favourites. Thank you.

Hello Hamid,
Lovely natural colours and good DOF. Like the others, I also think that the flowers are too central, but had a look at the workshop and it has brought out the superb shot hidden in your original image.
TFS,

Shelly.

Hi Hamid,
I love your shot so much.
So full of harmony. I love the red of this poppies and the wide land behind, so quiet and peaceful, thank you very much, I can relax while looking to this shot.
Bye and best wishes
Sabine - wishnugaruda

beatiful color of closeup in your image plus nice combination and composition. thanks for sharing.

Beautiful Nature picture, Hamid.
May your fine country be full with that soon.
Jan

Hi Hamid,
great shot! I like the way you captured this but also must say that Kit's workshop is also very strong! keep shooting!

marek

  • Great 
  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1206 W: 151 N: 655] (8171)
  • [2006-01-04 15:29]

Hello Hamid!
What a fantastic picture!
You've defenetly chossen a great POv that emphasizes the landscape and the colors! Trully beautiful!
Thanks for sharing!
Luci

  • Great 
  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1153 W: 70 N: 1116] (16)
  • [2006-01-06 15:55]

Beautiful colours.
Mitra

a photo with great potential, Kit's workshop has done the trick.

REMINDER:
I, along with a few others, am only giving points to anyone with a total of 500 or less. Donít give points to me unless you really feel that you have to or have great difficulty breaking the habit Ė give them to newcomers?
please,

Christine.

Hello Hamid, This is an amazing shot. The composition, The POV and the colors are great.

Well seen, See you on TL, Marie-Josť

Hi Hamid!
This is truly a masterpiece. Well done.
Regards.
Ram

  • Great 
  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 697 W: 36 N: 423] (3851)
  • [2006-01-26 3:55]

Superb Image Hamid, great indication for the twins! TFS

Wong

  •      
  • james Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 148 W: 2 N: 91] (392)
  • [2006-02-16 13:52]

excellent dof and super crisp focus, wonderful shot you got here. keep up the great work, and thank you for sharing with us...james

  • Great 
  • Nebihe (64)
  • [2006-03-09 18:20]

merhaba Hamid,
harika ellerinize saglik.
Nebihe

  • Great 
  • cafe Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 79 W: 0 N: 25] (1237)
  • [2006-05-08 18:22]

The twin shot is great, those popies in the background is the bonus to the scene. I think if you crop the sky a little more, it probably gains more focuss. TFS, Giap.

  • Great 
  • jacobo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 597 W: 28 N: 650] (4739)
  • [2006-05-22 19:09]

very good shot. Incredible colours and landscape.
Well done!
Jacobo

This is certainly one of my favourites from your album Hamid. The colour is strong and it stands out very well from the background. I like the backlighting on the stems.

Joe

  • Great 
  • dbp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 644 W: 9 N: 92] (4132)
  • [2006-07-19 10:31]

beautiful picture.
very good f.o.v.
and by the way ,in Israel you can make a very similr picture.
David

Merhaba Hamid
Beautiful composition. Very nice flowers. Good colours.
Well done.

Kerem

  • Great 
  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1816 W: 39 N: 465] (4859)
  • [2006-08-02 9:39]

Salam Hamid,

This is such a beautiful motif which can be choosen for a love e-card. An excellent shot indeed.

Compliments for sharing this picture!

  • Great 
  • glint Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 593 W: 3 N: 545] (3785)
  • [2006-08-30 16:08]

Hello Hamid,
you hardly need my points but here they are anyway. For some reason this shot reminds me of lovers. I like everything about it.
Bev

i like ur picture, but you should have changed the angle ( pov ) from up or down ! but good colours though !

  • Great 
  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1540 W: 114 N: 2985] (16653)
  • [2006-10-06 6:44]

Beautiful shot Hamid, lovely colours, excellent composition and DOF. Well done, thanks for sharing,

Cheers,
Sweety

Soooo perfect...beautiful.

I really liked.

Congratulations

Carol.

Hello Hamid! Beautiful shot and great colours and clarity! Fantastic point of view! Very well done! Lili

Hi Hamid,

Simple gorgeous... such a stunning vibrance in these two flowers, they are nicely detailed... and the perspective in this image is totally and utterly beautiful.

Great, truly great image. The subject matter is central, but that's what makes this image have that impact... it's right there, no need to look... and such a soft background.

Biance.

Hello Hamid,
Stunning picture! You make these poppies look fragile and powerful at the same time. It's true they are a bit centered, but this time, I don't mind.
TFS & have a nice day,
Erik

Hi Hamid
It's beautiful. Great foto. Extra colors. Best regards from Poland. Tomek

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  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 3811 W: 2520 N: 16] (72)
  • [2010-03-18 5:23]

Hello Hamid,

Excellent shot with fantastic FG and very good BG.
Colors, lighting and contrast are just perfect.
Congratulations and TFS
Sergio

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