My Model 1
|Copyright: haldian arsenta (gavindya)
|Medium: Black & White|
|Date Taken: 2008-04|
|Camera: Canon 50D|
|Details: Tripod: Yes (Fill) Flash: Yes|
|Photo Version: Original Version|
|Date Submitted: 2018-01-04 0:30|
|[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note|
|Please give me a Comment and critique|
many thank you
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- [2018-01-04 9:33]
A good portrait, in my opinion.
I like the light/shadow, b&w and tight cropping.
I don't like the letters below.
Tfs & regards
- [2018-01-04 10:19]
Being not even a lover of this kind of photography that are portraits, I find yours very successful, everything is there: the particular expression of this admirable model, the successful framing, the shadows superbly mastered!
Congratulations on this magnificent portrait that possesses a soul, a story!
As Joseph mention it, the lights and the shadows superbly mastered!
another POV which make u feel in this portrait by facial expression of this beautiful model... "the beautiful life is going on" for ever and ever we wish all the best for this lovely lady BRAVO HALDIAN ARSENTA
- [2018-01-07 1:50]
This is a very good portrait and the B&W conversion works really well with the hard lighting, pose and close-cropped image. I like the image very much, but I don't like how pronounced your name is at the bottom of the image - it draws the eye away from the overall picture.
- [2018-01-08 17:28]
An attractive portrait with good lighting- totally spoiled with the lettering at the bottom