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Copyright: Miro Susta (mirosu) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 26] (172)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2012-10-11
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Nikon D-7000, Nikkor 18-200 1:3.5-5.6 ED DX
Exposure: f/4
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2016-02-17 2:42
Viewed: 1218
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Photo tken from the car on the way from Dhaka to Mirzapur in Bangladesh.
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Hi Miro

An impressive photo considering you shot it from a car. If I have a criticism it's that the image looks a little flat. Perhaps a little pp work would liven it up.

poor composition here I'm afraid Miro.

The reason it looks so flat is there's absolutely no sense of motion
The ultra short perspective and vanishing point is so compressed, the dynamics of what is is you tried to achieve have been lost.
Are the subjects moving or are they static? There's absolutely no sense of speed, motion or direction at all.
The bus looks like a puppet suspended from the power/telephony lines running across the top of roof of the vehicle too.

The quality of the shot is really very poor too, and I don't think this is a camera/lens failure, but purely a media conversion failure.
There is very prominent evidence of pixel ghosting, particularly around the heads of the roof riders. The shot is VERY noisy, and the colour saturation is appalling.

What's with the copyright watermark?
I don't think you need to copyright this or any other shot. I don't think there's any finance to be gained by anyone wanting to Steal or sell your shots.

Hi Miro,
I like the idea of the shot showing daily life on the roads however I feel their is a lot of noise and wasted sky space.

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