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the way of life

the way of life
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Copyright: daisy daisy (daisydaisy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 111 N: 1055] (5943)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2015-08
Camera: Sony alpha 230, Sony 18-55
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2015-08-14 6:45
Viewed: 1127
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Iso : 100
Temps d'exposition : 1/200 sec
Ouverture du diaphragme : f/13

I hesitated between black and white and partial desaturation.
Finally I have chosen the color that represents exactly what I saw, the real scene.

The sunlight was very strong, I observed the sea, I was with my thoughts.

The curves of this place pleased me, but it lacked something, a couple appeared to observe the sea.

I have waited that people place themselves where I wanted and I pressed the button.

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Good pov showing the attractive curves of sea wall and road. The yellow adds to the shot and the people are well placed. The sea looks dark and ominous.

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  • artabb Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 341 W: 34 N: 182] (3637)
  • [2015-08-14 12:30]

Very successful shot. I love the geometrical pattern formed by the two walls and the point of interest of the two people strictly adhering with the law of thirds.

Hi, Daisy. Excellent composition especially the point of view which draws attention to the curved wall and leads the eye to the couple standing in front of the sea. Natural colors and texture also act to the also add to the composition. Thanks for sharing.

Bonjour Daisy,
Beau titre qu'on peut traduire comme "l'amour cherche les lieux abandonnés".
Les couleurs te remercient pour les garder.
Belle pièce.

Hi Daisy,
Simple yet effective as the two safely on ground admire the power of the ocean.

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 13 N: 1404] (6384)
  • [2015-09-06 14:41]

Hi Daisy, lovely lines in this shot and excellent PoV and contrasts in tone, texture land and sea :)

Best wishes


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