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Photo Information
Copyright: Nathalie Turon (Nathuron) Silver Note Writer [C: 5 W: 0 N: 21] (117)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2013-03-12
Categories: Macro
Camera: Nikon D80, Sigma 105mm F2.8 DG EX Macro
Exposure: f/11, 1/40 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2015-03-10 15:31
Viewed: 1158
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Playing around with water in my living room.

The weather was grey and rainy, so no sunlight. But still a lot of fun :-)
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To photosbytw: Nope, it was....Nathuron 2 03-28 22:14
To bobsmith: CompositionNathuron 1 03-11 07:27
To Matyas: Thanks a lot!Nathuron 1 03-11 07:25
To marine-coeur: Thank you!Nathuron 1 03-11 07:24
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The photo is a little soft. Tripod? Shutter release? Mirror lockup? All of those would have improved your attempt. Your focal length is 105mm and with an APS-c sensor it would be 160mm thus your shutter speed needed to be somewhere near 1/200". I'm assuming the bubble was your subject and it's centered. The lower left appears to be the most interesting. I would have panned the camera to include more of the lower left.

Another beautiful bubble world indeed lights and 3D-details are brilliant well done NATHALIE TURON

Hello Nathalie! Fine art work. Delicate brightness. Nice colours. Superb exposure and capture. Splendid effect. Well done!

Hi Nathalie

Beautiful colours but I think the composition could have been a little more interesting. The depth of field is too narrow leaving most of the bubble soft.

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  • knle Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 8 N: 2] (92)
  • [2015-03-11 14:43]

Hi Nathalie
I like the idea behind this, but as others have pointed out, it seems that the depth of field is too narrow. But other than that it is really good.

Kim

Nathalie

I like this softness as well as the light, it is harmonious.
The complementary colors please me. Elegant result.

hi Nathalie,

what a nice macro, but i think a bit color correction need to make this photo's look more nice.

rgds
HA

Hi Nathalie, Nice colors and interesting abstract.......the soft focus of the large bubble reduces its importance as a subject. Thank for sharing
Anna

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