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aussie beach
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Copyright: Jack McGrane (jackal) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 790 W: 26 N: 808] (9654)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2015-02-17
Categories: Daily Life, Nature
Camera: Pentax K10D, Sigma 10-20mm f/4-5.6 DC EX HSM, 77 mm HOYA circular Polarizer
Exposure: f/13.0, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Hors Concours [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2015-02-22 15:22
Viewed: 895
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
a beach near Byron Bay with a pair of oyster catchers in the foreground
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To bobsmith: Beachjackal 1 02-23 14:23
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Hi Jack

I have to say that this isn't one of your better shots. I find the overall scene under-exposed and flat. The oyster catchers are lost in the scene and perhaps you could have waited until there was some separation between them. Sorry to be so negative.
Lastly, as a new moderator, can I say that your note is a bit minimal..

Hello Jack! Very fine minimalistic picture. Superb wide and long perspective. Fine capture, exposure and frame. Original work. Well done!


No matter of notes, it is a fantastic pic with nice details.


Boa tarde Jack,
One of the best photos I've seen here in TL. The apparent rigidity of all the elements that compose the image as if they were sculptures gives the landscape a surreal appearance.
It's hors concours.

A very good attempt but the birds(in the foreground)....................separate the birds. Of course I know challenging that is. Birds don't take instructions very well.

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