<< Previous Next >>

order amongst chaos

order amongst chaos
Photo Information
Copyright: Dan Bachmann (danbachmann) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 90 W: 15 N: 72] (592)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 1996-03-03
Categories: Event, Portrait
Camera: Pentax PZ-20, Pentax FA 28-80mm
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Children of the World [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-07-09 12:06
Viewed: 3224
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This was taken at a wedding. I was taking a group shot and everyone was in chaos, but this little girl was in perfect order.
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

I like the digitally enhanced background. Nice.

  • Great 
  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246)
  • [2004-07-10 3:48]

At firts, i thogh that the background was a litel bit to much, cahotich. The n iread your note and it made perfect sence. It loosk liek she is emereing from chaos. I bet, if we had seen her feet to, she woudl be floating. It's difficult to describe what itis a feel when looking at this picture but it is all on the positive side ;)

  • Great 
  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 24 N: 1485] (11941)
  • [2004-07-18 2:47]

I like the radial blur here. This picture has nice colors too.

A fun idea of radial blur for a portrait. You might also try separating the girl from the background, and blurring the layer behind her for a different look. Nice idea and well executed.

  • Great 
  • osinzj (35)
  • [2004-09-23 20:30]

O efeito a cor amarela foi muito bem conseguido dando-lhe uma sensação de movimento que torna a foto muito interessante

Calibration Check