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Copyright: Michael Dolby (mrmike1935) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 31 W: 0 N: 213] (4654)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2014-07-05
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Leica V-Lux 4, DC Vario-Elmarit 1:2.8-3.3/6-72 ASPH, Digital
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2014-07-17 6:58
Viewed: 722
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This Girl with her Rainbow Hair, and the ever present Mobile, came walking down the street during the Festival.
The crowds parted in awe, as she passed.
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To imageme: Slimmrmike1935 1 07-20 08:04
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Hi, Michael. This is a nice composition of everyday life these days. Rainbow here's our very common these days and agree with you mobile is Omni present. The other day I bumped into someone but she was not as pretty as this one. The other half of the photo shows an interesting combination of things and add to the photo and the composition. Cheers.

Hi Mike,
Does she or doesn't she is no longer a question asked about hair dye as rainbow effects are not commonly natural ;-). This is a very striking portrait of a young woman, typical of her generation.

Regards,
Lois

Hi Mike

My opinion of this photo is different to the previous two people.
The exposure isn't good. The ground and sign at ground level is overexposed and much detail is lost. You have also missed capturing all of her feet. As is her shoulder and arm, which has also lost detail of the tattoo. The girl, I feel, needs a little more space to walk into. The arm of the mannequin could have been removed as well.

Sorry, overall not very good. But this is my opinion only.

Hi Michael, Nice snapshot of daily life in the street. The elements on the left side add to the casual look of this snapshot. The girl's arm and feet and also the pavement are too o/e, for the photography pov it is not a perfect shot but if one sees it as a snapshot, it is the reality of now a days how the young people spend most of time on their appearances and cellular phones. Thank for sharing
Anna

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