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Those lines

Those lines
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Copyright: Jean Dwyer (jean11-3) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1481 W: 0 N: 3257] (16374)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2014-05-30
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Sony cybershot DSC-N1
Exposure: f/4, 1/80 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Those lines [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2014-06-21 13:22
Viewed: 1485
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Title for this week's theme, I think? "Those Lines."

I thought that this piece of art work portraying an Allium flower in mild steel fitted the bill!
The artist, 'Willa Ashton'.

Set in amongst the flowers, thus giving a rather busy bg.
Seen at Delamore Annual art festival.

Thanks for looking.

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Hi, Jean. It desperate the theme but I like the composition especially with the flowers in the garden adding some contrast. Nice sharpness and well composed. Thanks for sharing.

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  • eosnut Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 647 W: 285 N: 2085] (13374)
  • [2014-06-21 21:59]

Hello Jean,

I instantly thought Ferris Wheel.

Interesting sculpture, nice sharp details,
and the colours are so attractive.

Well seen,

Bom dia Jean,
This is undoubtedly a great contribution to the topic this week that does not exist, it seems that Steve forgot to create the group ...
You have found a beautiful way to enhance the sculpture with these diverging rays from the center.
Elegant depth and beautiful finish with the framing used.

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  • canish (287)
  • [2014-06-22 0:42]

Hi Jean.
Interesting subject for the theme.
Cheers Dave.

Good interpretation of Friday's theme, I like it. It looks like it is exploding art work. Good details. Well done, tfs.

bonjour Jean
impressive iron alium , I thought at first sight it was a dandelion
; but it is not so far

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  • suzley Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 317 N: 3045] (23928)
  • [2014-06-25 12:50]

Exciting entry.
I like how you chose to fill the screen.

A slight pointer....

I may have either moved the center of the sculpture to the middle of the frame or moved it more to the left as feel you have it mid-way...if you know what I mean.

Small gripe though....lol


Hi Jean..nice shot. you showed the structure and shape well...


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