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YOSEMITE
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Copyright: KEN COLE (KAYCEE) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 30 W: 0 N: 58] (1087)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 1992-06
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2014-05-01 1:45
Viewed: 921
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another image taken within the Park, during trip to California in 1992
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Hi Ken,

The idea is to use the country where the photo is taken, not where you are living. Yosemite, is located in the USA not the UK.
As for the photo, could have used a grad ND to better balance the exposure allowing for more details in the shadowed FG.
Niek

About the place I agree with Niek.

But I want to talk about the picture,
I love the composition and light and shadows in the picture, Too lucky to you have the clouds in the sky, Nice shapes on the mountains and lovely blue sky, Great start from the down and perfect end on the sky, just need at the start alittle high light to have more details, Superb work dear friend, Congrats :D
Naseer

Hi Ken, it's kind of tough to give you personally, a critique on this image, due to the date you had taken it, I would assume if you were to go back today & take the same subject, you might, as Niek suggest use a grad ND for the reasons he noted. It is a good image to give a critique,especially for those members that are new to photography, as they can learn from the critiques posted to it. I have done a Workshop to show hopefully, what an ND filter & lightening up the foreground can change the visual composition. Food for thought I hope.
Regards
Ron

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