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The red coat

The red coat
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Copyright: Jean Fraipont (Reflex) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 639 W: 205 N: 43] (1347)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2014-02-26
Categories: Mood
Camera: Canon 550D, canon 70-300mm 1:4-5.6 IS USM
Exposure: f/4, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2014-04-19 7:09
Viewed: 1217
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
The hall of this building interested me in its colors. A woman in red coat passed. Where from the automatic mode without flash used for more speed.
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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1089 W: 589 N: 1943] (14753)
  • [2014-04-19 9:21]

Greetings Jean, I like this image very much, it tells a story,& makes one question what they are viewing. Is the woman arriving or leaving? Is the building a place of learning, such as a school or a library, is she on her way to a lecture, or perhaps a keep fit class or?
You have capture the interior lighting well & your image is well focused, clear details & with a good DOF & a strong composition.TFS

Hello Jean,a very interesting PoV.I like that we can see along the corridor deep into the building.And the woman in the red coat really does add to the picture; without her, there would be no real focal point imo.
Good work.
Tfs, regards Jean.

Lots of interesting things in this shot. The standard is to have people/things moving into the picture but by doing the opposite you created a feel of haste, almost as she is late (or going home). The red door and chair is in competition with the coat and I would change to colour of those to make the red stand out more. (see workshop).
Well spotted scene and TFS

Hi Jean,
It sure has an array of striking colors, and the women with the red coat adds impact to your image.Strong shapes and lines and well detailed.

Salut Jean ,
Comme d ' hab ' , un sacré coup d ' oeil , le juste timing , l ' association des couleurs , la compo , etc ., font ... de nouveau une excellente photo de Jean
" Reflex " Fraipont !
Ah , oui , je les " guettent " , tes images sur T.L. , mon cher Jean ! Elles se font plus rares , d ' ailleurs , non !?... Mais faut dire que je " m ' absente " de plus en plus de ce site , donc je loupe peut - être des choses ....
Allez , encore bravo , et à plus ....
Ernest .

Bom Jean,
C'est beau, c'est un Jean Frapoint.
La sensibilité et la rigeur d'habitude.
Heureuse Pâque.

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  • suzley Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 317 N: 3045] (23928)
  • [2014-04-23 9:31]

Very artistic in your eye spotting this one

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