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Copyright: RDM TKL (RD66) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 28 W: 15 N: 6] (426)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2012-09-16
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D300, 18-55 f/3.5-5.6
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/250 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2014-02-10 20:39
Viewed: 853
Points: 1
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Los d'une promenade dans le parc de Sceaux, dans les Hauts de Seine.
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To bobsmith: About NAT-SCRD66 1 02-11 10:32
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Hi Romano

Well done for experimenting with depth of field, but in my opinion, this shallow DOF doesn't work. I look to the background, it doesn't hold my attention so I look back at the flowers. I've held a sheet of paper to cover the flower on the left and I think the photo works better without it. The flower on the right has a blurred fountain coming out of the top of it, and that doesn't work either. I also think the white flowers are slightly overexposed.
Sorry, just my opinion.

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