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Copyright: Henk van Dyk (henkv) (35)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2013-12-01
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 5D Mark II, Canon 24-70mm F2.8 L
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/160 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2013-12-02 14:01
Viewed: 1200
Points: 3
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Redhead portrait
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  • suzley Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 317 N: 3045] (23928)
  • [2013-12-03 3:17]

Powerful eye detail and contact.


Hi Henk
Please understand these are simply my personal opinions and are meant to be constructive and not cause any offence. And, of course, you have the option of accepting or rejecting them.
I love the eyes and hair; her face seems, to me, to be a little devoid emotion. Plus, in my opinion, the pose looks contrived and a little unnatural and awkward. The vignette has been applied a little heavy handed and the lighting is a little flat and could be boosted a little. Everything just seems to be nearly there, but not quite.
Love the background.

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