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Copyright: daisy daisy (daisydaisy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 111 N: 1055] (5943)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2013-08
Camera: Sony alpha 230, Sony 18-55
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2013-08-26 11:49
Viewed: 1723
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
SONY DSLR A 230
Iso : 100
Temps d'exposition : 1/60 sec
Ouverture du diaphragme : f/8

Paris, Palais de Tokyo
I noticed the man at the window ... I have not had time to frame correctly and to think about the settings.
So I do it after.

You can see the original before pp work in WS.


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To bobsmith: The mandaisydaisy 1 08-26 13:01
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Hi Daisy
I think the lighting and mood in this image is amazing. It raises questions in my mind....I know he's not a young man but, who is he, what's he looking at, is he happy or sad?
As I said, the lighting and mood created are amazing. And, despite it being a quick shot, the framing is perfect.
I think I'll add it to my list of favourites.

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1089 W: 589 N: 1943] (14753)
  • [2013-08-26 12:09]

lots of mood in this composition Daisy,the silhouette of the man with his ouline easy to define, & the touch of highlight on the seats as well as the reflected light on the floor united together, make for a very interesting visual,that tells us a story.If I were allowed to alter anything,I might be tempted to eraze the letters that read toilet.TFS,I liked viewing this very much.

Cheers

Ron

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  • suzley Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 317 N: 3045] (23928)
  • [2013-08-27 0:51]

High levels of intrigue to your work of late, love it.
Moodiness Rules Ok.

stv

Simple but powerful composition! Good use of the silhouette of the person for scale. I like the soft lighting. Well done, tfs.

Hi Daisy, nicely spotted with the man in the edge of the shadows but still partly in sihouette against the windows.Fiona

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