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Spring Onion

Spring Onion
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Copyright: Steve Fry (suzley) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 317 N: 3045] (23928)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2013-08-02
Categories: Food, Nature
Camera: Lumix DMC G 3
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2013-08-04 6:58
Viewed: 1014
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A difference the weather can make, all is good with the growing of vegetables.
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Hi Steve is this an HDR?I like the effect you achieved.
I wondered if a tighter crop would have made much difference to your composition,as I thought there was just a tad to much space in the background,did a WS to compare.



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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2013-08-04 7:58]


Superbe vue de ces oignons tout rouge il sont très bon et l'air très bon merveilleuse image et compo superbe.
Bravo et amitié

Hello Steve,
Beautiful still life,excellent detail and colours saturation.
Best regards,

Simple subjects can be beautiful with proper lighting and of course a good photographer. Love the colors of those onions. Very well done, tfs.

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  • bones Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 126 W: 5 N: 72] (1081)
  • [2013-08-04 10:05]

Hi Steve

I actually like this image.
the space from the front to the end leads the eye back to the sharp end of the onion every time. well captured

dear Steve,
very nice composition and interesting colors.
composition is perfect.
I am agree with blur background.

best regards,
Mehran Jahangiri.


I love these colors !!! Looks like HDR, so beautiful result.
Excellent vertical presentation, with nice textures, wood and vegetal.
Well balanced work, elegant taste.

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  • john1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 438 W: 0 N: 886] (8448)
  • [2013-08-04 12:14]

Hi Steve,

Amazing shot, very nice colors.
Splendid saturation , I like very much the texture of the wood.
Great job, TFS.
Have a good week.

Hallo Steve

Cfrumoasa poatefi si...ceapa rosie cateodata..
Avem aici o dovada palpabila...
Frumos POV

Numai bine


Très réussit cette composition verticale. Bravo à toi.


Hi Steve, I think that you have been polishing these onions specially for this shot!!
The colours stand out, as well as their shiny surface.... good enough to eat!
I like the shallow DoF and the different textures.The 'portrait' presentation was a good choice.
Tfs, regards Jean.

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