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Copyright: Robert Daveant (bobdaveant) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 18 W: 0 N: 12] (588)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2010-02-27
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Canon EOS 20D, Canon EF24-70mm f/2.8 L USM
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/40 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2013-07-30 20:57
Viewed: 3045
Points: 9
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My three week old cousin baby Vincent. This was my first infant photo shoot and one of my most memorable. Such a beautiful moment to be part of.
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Ola Robert
Good focus, good B/W cohice...beautiful moment
um abraço

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  • suzley Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 317 N: 3045] (23928)
  • [2013-07-31 1:24]

The closeup of the hands is always a winner, nice choice of tones.


Hi Robert

Please understand these are simply my personal opinions and are meant to be constructive and not cause any offence. And, of course, you have the option of accepting or rejecting them.
Although I like the idea of focussing on the baby's hand and using a shallow depth of field to reneder the baby's face softly blurred, I don't think you have focussed correctly. To my eye, the focus is on the adult finger, which I don't think you intended.
I like the compostion and the choice of black and white though.

salut robert,
bien faut...
excellent moment

Hallo Robert

O imagine sensibila..
Imi place, mai ales ca ai ales varianta alb-negru...

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