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Copyright: daisy daisy (daisydaisy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 111 N: 1055] (5943)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2013-06
Camera: Sony alpha 230, Sony 18-55
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2013-06-04 3:21
Viewed: 869
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
SONY DSLR A 230
Iso : 400
Temps d'exposition : 1/15 ec
Ouverture du diaphragme : f/5.60

Mode automatique

I used a ping pong ball.
Have you ever tried to play ping pong with a fork ?
To make this picture ... I had played ping pong with a fork .... interesting ....

The bg is a gray wall.
I played with the radius and also light and contrast.

I know that lack of sharpness on the ball but I think it works.

The fork is made of metal, the camera has chosen the focus on the fork .... GOOD work Mr Automatic mode !

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Hi Daisy
Nice black and white shot. I like the way the background has a lighter halo around the ball. Like you, I think the soft focus on the ball works well.
There is some fringing around the fork handle and I can't make up my mind...Would I prefer it if the letters on the ball were level. No, I think the way you have presented it is best.

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  • suzley Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 317 N: 3045] (23928)
  • [2013-06-04 5:30]

Very comical to think of playing this with a fork.
Love the angle and tones, perfecto impact made.

stv ;o))

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  • VicZik Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 528 W: 82 N: 950] (4812)
  • [2013-06-04 13:17]

Daisy, you do not need to apologize, your work os awesome and the photo looks great, I like the bokeh and the idea, TFS
Best
Vic

This is a unique work of a unique mind, Daisy!
Great approach with superb details of the fork and a little blur on ball shows it was in slight "motion".
Well done, Daisy!

Mercí,
Paras

Hi Daisy,definitely one better suited for b&w. I am glad you left the ball tilted, it doesnt look as staged with the writing on a lean.Fiona

Bonjour Daisy,
C'est pas tous les jours qu'on une telle creativitée! ;o}
Des choses si simples comme une fourchette et une boule gagnent une si distiction. Grace à toi.
R.

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  • eosnut Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 647 W: 285 N: 2085] (13374)
  • [2013-06-08 1:27]

Hello Daisy,
That must be a very heavy ping pong ball...it has bent your bat ;-)
A very nice B&W image, very sharp details, and the vignette emphasises the ball, well done.
Pete.

dear daisy,
composition of the photo is very good.
I congratulate to you.

Best Regards,
Mehran Jahangiri.

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