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Balinese Dancer


Balinese Dancer
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Copyright: sadewo eko (ess) (105)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2012-04-24
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/8, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2013-06-02 17:49
Viewed: 1637
Points: 1
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Hello, Sadewo,
I found your photo very interesting and I like that you chose to do it in B&W. That turned out really nice. There are a few problems, though. You left far too much space at the top and nearly cut off the feet. Centering your subject isn't always a good thing, either. And it's always a nice thing to write a descriptive note. I have done a workshop to show you how I might have done it differently. Hope you don't mind. Many thanks and kind regards,
Shelly

Great shot, but I'd crop left and right to focus on the dancer more. Too bad about the feet, but what the hell one looks at the face and feet are implied anyway. Give us more.

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