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Copyright: Michel Mcdemtl (mcdemtl) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 25 W: 0 N: 15] (1003)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2013-02
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Nikon D3000
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/100 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2013-03-20 15:31
Viewed: 841
Points: 0
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Les usines Angus, furent un complexe industriel voué à la construction de matériel roulant ferroviaire. Construites entre 1902 et 1904 sur un site de 47 000 hectares par le Canadien Pacifique.

The Angus were an industrial complex dedicated to the construction of railway rolling stock. Built between 1902 and 1904 on a site of 47,000 hectares by the Canadian Pacific railroad.

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To bobsmith: Hello Bobmcdemtl 1 03-23 08:33
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Hi Michel

Please understand these are simply my personal opinions and are meant to be constructive and not cause any offence. And, of course, you have the option of accepting or rejecting them.
A nice diagonal adds to he impact of this shot. There is nice detail and interest through the openings and the shot was well seen and composed. The brickwork has nice colour and detail. I think some of the distortion could have been removed, I think the vertical line nearest the right hand side edge could have been more perpendicular. I'm only a novice, but I think there is some fringing between the building and the sky (maybe from being overworked) and the clouds have some noise (also, possibly, from being overworked)
Some notes on how you achieved the shot would be helpful.

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