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Look like Paddy or Wheat

Look like Paddy or Wheat
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Copyright: Lavan SJ (lavan) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 710 W: 2 N: 153] (4208)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2012-12-30
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/400 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2013-01-02 2:09
Viewed: 1304
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Look like a paddy or a wheat but it is actually not
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  • suzley Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 317 N: 3045] (23928)
  • [2013-01-02 5:35]

Hi Lavan

Such wonderful colours to the bokeh to enhance the subject. The grassy fronds dancing in the breeze and the colours of rustic and green command the attention it deserves. tfs

stv ;o))

Hello Lavan,

There is much grace in these dancing grasses. You did a good job freezing the movement but unfortunately, the dark area in the background somehow diminishes the impact of it. Though there is no real visual confusion with the flower, it still is too prominent for my taste. Maybe a slightly different (lower?) point of view could have resolved this issue. But I guess you did what you could in the given circumstances...

Of course, this only is my personal opinion (so, feel free to (dis)agree ;o)) and this remains an interesting photo to me.

TFS & kind regards,

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  • rychem Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 736 W: 13 N: 634] (21244)
  • [2013-02-05 10:34]

Such little plants can be sometimes very attractive, I like the shapes and colors of this plant, nicely blurred BG

The colours in this shot are vibrant and the shot is clear and sharp however i agree with Erik. I believe it might have been possible to remove the dark bg from a lower pov. Of curse I dont know whether the ground was wet or muddy so there may have been good reason why you didnt choose a steeper pov. I hope you dont mind the criticism.

dear lavan,
interesting bokeh and beautiful colours.
composition is good too.

kind regards,
Mehran Jahangiri.

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