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a morning in Shelby Farms Park

a morning in Shelby Farms Park
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Copyright: Ruby Sarkar (rubyfantacy) Silver Note Writer [C: 5 W: 0 N: 24] (78)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2012-09-22
Categories: Nature
Camera: Olympus Pen EPL 1, Olympus Zuiko 14-54mm
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2012-09-23 12:03
Viewed: 1439
Points: 6
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yesterday was my third day in Shelby Farms Park. and the first sunny day as well. morning was beautiful. so was the day. loved the time i spent there.. with Nature.
loved that fusion of different shades of 'blue' taking place in front of my eyes.. it was magical!

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Hello Ruby,
The various shades of blue are pleasant indeed. Cropping off at the bottom would improve the composition and hopefully also eliminate the bit that informs us that this is a photograph. And about the photographer's name in the image, well it is a matter of taste ... or attitude. In my opinion the indeterminate blue objects on the right, and the whole jetty for that matter, does nothing for the scene and neither does the vehicle middle right. The white fence posts and the small figures of what appear to be cyclists or hikers also do not do it for me but these are just my observations for you to accept or reject in your own wisdom. And may I add that, according to my understanding, this site is about photography and not about photographers so that first person "I, me, myself" kind of reportage does not fit that purpose. I sincerely apologise if you perceive my comments as being unfair but it is only my opinion which you are welcome to ignore. Still worth my two points, though :) Best wishes.

Hi Ruby..nice shot...excellent tones and details. Nicely composed.


Hi Ruby

Have to agree that the different shades of blue and the stillness of the water is amazing! I like the fact that the equal space has been given to the water and sky, it creates a nice effect for me, becuase of the blues! The reflections seen on the left (by the little boats) adds an interesting effect too!

Complimentary frame!

Nicely done!


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