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~ Erosion - Keep Out ~

~ Erosion - Keep Out ~
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Copyright: Alaettin KI (TasmaniaC) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 853 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2012-07-09
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture, Artwork, Macro
Camera: Nikon D80 DSLR
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/25 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Friday Theme 2012/09/21 "Erosion" [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2012-09-20 22:42
Viewed: 2303
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
for the Friday Theme " EROSION "

I took this photo during our holiday this summer, these interlaced iron bars showing the effects of the past. Although they have been hundreds of years old, they were in remarkable condition. Apart from some minor adjustment and resizing, not much done to the photo.

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  • Great 
  • suzley Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 317 N: 3045] (23928)
  • [2012-09-20 23:22]

Hi Alaettin

Great addition to theme friday, the depth and focal point works so well here, we feel the weight and condition, good light management also, tight crops also adds intrigue as to the full size. tfs

stv ;o))


Excellent pov and choice of focus which gives a nice dynamic graphics of iron bars.
Minimalist work very well done.
A great entry to the Theme Erosion.

Hello Alaettin,
Nice capture with perfect clarity and colour,I like the perspective of different direction,My Regards,_Joy.

Hello Alaettin, a good close up of the rusted metal, with a good sharp focus on just one of the struts.
I like the pattern that you have created by the tight crop.
Rust is fascinating, and makes wonderful shots.
Tfs, regards Jean.

Bom dia Alaettin,
Very good shot and very interesting entry to the weeks theme.
Nice angulat POV and shallow DOF. Good sharpness at the focal point.

Nice presentation and composition, Alaettin.

Good shallow focus throwing all but a small portion of the image into a nice gentle blur, still leaving enough of the image recognisable.

Strong and natural rust red colour too.

Nice shot,


nice colors and clarity..good POV
rust never sleeps
great shot

  • Great 
  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 818 W: 84 N: 1189] (10601)
  • [2012-09-21 15:33]

Really nice and different :D Nice selective focus also :)

  • Great 
  • crazy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 128 W: 0 N: 38] (343)
  • [2014-02-05 22:50]

I like it.

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