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...bathroom colors...
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Copyright: Trudy Wiebe (teamill) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1499 W: 271 N: 1908] (10985)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-10-22
Categories: Experimental
Camera: Nikon Coolpix P80
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/30 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2011-10-25 7:34
Viewed: 1289
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I took my camera to a shopping center on the weekend ... I got a few funny looks as I shot interesting things in a huge department store :)

This display was in the bathroom section. I loved the colors of these cups, small dishes and soap dispensers.

Cropped slightly, color and contrast boosted just a little.

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Hi Trudy..nice shot...simple and artistic composition. Well done.

Roger

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1250 W: 106 N: 2911] (22323)
  • [2011-10-25 8:24]

Hi Trudy,
Good eye ! Love the pastels--- and I love getting funny looks from people who are wondering what you are shooting. Well seen and composed. TFS Julie

Hi Trudy

The colors are talking!
Well seen and well taken as well, great use of colors for shopping temptation
A little crop from top to eliminate that uneven back will help
TFS
Alireza

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2011-10-25 8:45]

Hi Trudy,
A nice play with colors 'your style' which I like! Beautiful details and such a lovely geometrical composition! Good play with light and shadows.
Anyhow an artistic presentation which you, with you artistic abilities, have produced in such sharpness and neatness.
Well done,

Francis Xavier

Good morning Trudy,

Simple and good about the position and artistic composition.
Soft colors well done. Well done
Cordially.
Yolande

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1929 W: 117 N: 3017] (13240)
  • [2011-10-25 11:49]

Ola Trudy
Excellent the effect you got with this similar forms and the vivid colors. I would crop a little more on top and in the left eliminating the dark space behind. However I like it a lot.
Regards, mb

Boa noite trudy
Fine sharpness in this colorful photo with an efective visual effect. So happy.
Um abrašo
teresa

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  • Tezza Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 213 W: 97 N: 368] (3380)
  • [2011-10-25 15:33]
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I've been away for a while but I'm pleased to see you're still taking quirkly(?) cropped shots of everyday items turning them into something special. The rather flat texture of the vases compliments the colour and geometry to produce a very satisfying shot.

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3627 W: 881 N: 2607] (21386)
  • [2011-10-26 0:08]

I think that the upper corner should be cropped but I like the rest !
Lovely pastel colors

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124)
  • [2011-10-26 5:38]

Hi Trudy

Nice repetition of colors, patterns & shapes & good use of the whole frame with the effective tight framing. Good sharpness & lighting. Tfs!

Hi Trudy,it takes courage to be creative sometimes.But it paid off here.The colors are harmonious and the whole composition is delightful.Warm regards,Otto.

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