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Namrata


Namrata
Photo Information
Copyright: Max Drukpa (Drukpa) (14)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2011-08-20
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D300s, Sigma 24-70mm F2.8 EX DG Macro
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2011-08-28 18:40
Viewed: 2705
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hey all! Im new here and joined this site to get some advises from all of you.
So... lets start. This is my first entry.

I took this shot a few days ago here in Kathmandu, Nepal. Her hame is Namrata. Very beautiful girl.

But something wrong with this photo... or maybe with PP (but its quite simple -- BW convertion with channel mixer). I dont know.

Need your critiques.
What's wrong with this photo?

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Max
Welcome to TL.
Lovely model with a great smile.
What is wrong? Well, maybe a bit less space above her head - I find the over exposed white reflection distracting. Maybe tone down a bit on the dress as it also looks over exposed (maybe my monitor?).
TFS
Andrei

Dear MAZ DRUKPA very well come to TL
and also what a lovely and beautiful lady and image,
another excellent lights and details by artwork well done and do it again.

  • Good 
  • davejb (70)
  • [2015-12-13 8:18]

Seems good to me. Maybe a bit more detail in some whites. Would crop top of photo some.

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