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Aloha Maui


Aloha Maui
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Copyright: Lori Morra (loribird) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 920 W: 109 N: 1182] (5561)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-06-26
Categories: Nature
Camera: Sony A350, Sony 55-200mm
Exposure: f/8, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2011-06-12 11:51
Viewed: 1253
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
While searching the archives I came across this beach on the Napili shores. After traveling for almost 24 hours this was one of the first shots taken my first morning on Maui. I loved the lighting and the depth. I had to clone out the lawn chairs and a railing, added a bit of saturation, resized and sharpened. It has been raining and dreary for days and I wanted to see some sunshine. Hope you like it. Have a great day!

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Hi Lora
Very nice view,lovely colours,great lighting and good contrast.
TFS
Regards
Andrzej

I want to go there! Very nice capture of paradise. Lush green vegetation, blue sky and warm water. Wonderful colors. Well done, tfs.

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 13 N: 1404] (6384)
  • [2011-06-12 15:16]

Hi Lori,
Lovely depth and feel to this shot. I think the cloning could be improved - I know it's time consuming to get it right but on such a large area of the shot it really stands out if the cloning is not good. I find by altering the size of the brush and the opacity of the clone and going over and over taking care not to copy defects and reproduce them in a line - the area you have cloned is even more awkward as it is a large flat area, it may have been more beneficial to leave the lawn chairs in as a bit of focal point. The composition is good with the dark sky and low cloud highlighted by a good light and nice colour. Best wishes
Bri

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  • KrL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 504 W: 135 N: 502] (7619)
  • [2011-06-13 3:04]

Bonjour Lori,
Je viens d'aller visiter ta galerie, très beau voyage !
Par contre, je ne sais pas pourquoi tu as une perte de qualité sur cette photo... peut-être trop de recadrage ?
Bonne journée

Karèle

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2011-06-15 11:35]

Hello

Très belle perspective et iamge, superbe quel ciel avec la belle haie cette colline ronde en fond, super.

bravo et amitié

Nicou

Hi lori,
A place to have fresh air and to breath out all your tensions, lovely blue sky and green fields are the result of perfect light balancing ,
-koustav

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