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Lacross Practice


Lacross Practice
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Copyright: Lisa Williams (lisapw1) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 778 W: 102 N: 1602] (8893)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-03-21
Categories: Action
Exposure: f/8, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2011-04-03 19:31
Viewed: 1856
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I went to the local park to take a walk and stopped to watch some Lacross practice. I darkened a tad, resized, and sharpened for upload.

thanks for your comments, critiques, and workshops. I appreciate them. Lisa

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Nice work Lisa! I love how you isolated her, excellent contrasts here! Who knows, you could now become a sports photographer! I love the evening light here, and the sharpness is excellent!
B-)
Linda

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2572 W: 237 N: 6132] (24044)
  • [2011-04-05 4:32]
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Hi Lisa
I really love the idea of capturing the moment here: a moment that is tense with waiting.
If I may offer some suggestions for next time (and I do know how hard it is to think this through on the fly) -- it would really help if your subject was less centrally placed. In fact, I would really want lots more room in front of her than behind her. If this is cropped out of a larger image, perhaps you could try recropping so that there's almost twice the room in front of her as there is behind her.
I'd be VERY interested in seeing the difference

Great capture ,all I want to say/add to leave green background only. See my workshop .
Regards,
Hakki

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