The Yellow House
Funny of you having bright colors, when the first thing have notice is a little lack of brightness...Easy to give it that extra brightness, by using a program, with a "level" application. I would increase the highlight only.
As for composition, it might be straight on, but your eye; anyway that what I feel, seem to wonder what's happening on one side or the other. The right side is full of house, while the other side is deserted. I would have present it (the house) on one side of the shot, and using one or the other side, to place it in contexte...calm or busy...))) Editorial and repertory can be quite different...one tend to tell a certain storie, or contexte.
I would have done a workshop on it, but your option seem turn off..))) Too bad..)))
- [2011-03-07 17:25]
Nice idea, good pov but it's too dark, You need to adjust it with some PS job.