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Copyright: Russell Parker (ArtyParker) (6)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-02-26
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2011-03-06 13:30
Viewed: 2526
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Shot of some Impala's when on a safari.

Sharpened and colours brought out.

All advise welcome as it is much appreciated. Did not take the rule of thirds into account when shooting this, but I think it's still a nice shot.

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Hello Russell,

excellent capture of this herd of impala with the two of them looking back at you. Great point of view and composition - the impala in the foreground creates a nice sense of depth with this DOF. The only thing I can see that may have improved the photo was to frame it so that the baby impala on the right was completely in the photo.

- Jan

The composition has a nice flow to it. Without the male, it would not have had the nice curve in the eye direction.

  • loribird Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 920 W: 109 N: 1182] (5561)
  • [2011-03-07 20:11]

Such a nice shot of such beautiful subjects. Would love to see more, perhaps of them not so 'busy' with so many in the shot, but given the scene you did a great job. TFS, Lori

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