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Wedding Veil


Wedding Veil
Photo Information
Copyright: Galder Jon Arguinzoniz (galderjon) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 526 W: 87 N: 574] (2755)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-09
Categories: Event
Camera: PENTAX K_x, SMC PENTAX-DA 55-300 1:4-5.8ED W/C, SanDisk SD-HC 8GB
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/460 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2011-02-15 3:25
Viewed: 1968
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken at Champs de Mars near by the Eiffel Tower, this couple were having a photo shoot by their hired photographer and by all who had a camera around, which included me...

I was lucky to get this point of view where I could frame both faces through the veil and her left hand with the shiny golden wedding ring :)

Applied some contrast and played around (slightly) with other settings, also cropped the right side and increased the negative space in front of them and used the clone tool to fill it up.
Framed in a simple white 'paspartout'.

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To dipsybee: looking atgalderjon 1 02-15 04:41
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Superb POV and shade gives it a little veil of mystery.
Nice!
Congratulations!
Ionela

Hi Galder,

This is a beautiful portrait - You have chosen a good POV and the composition is lovely. I like the expressions captured on the couple's faces in profile (I presume they were posing for the hired photographer and looking directly at him). Nice detail and perfect background, I think the couple would like your shot to add to their wedding album.

Regards

Joy

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2953 W: 139 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2011-02-15 5:16]

HI Galder,
What an artistic wedding photo! Great creativity with this veil covering both spouses!
Nice soft render to both portraits!
A great dark BG o enhance the composition.
Well done,

Francis Xavier

Beautiful creative shot- Well managed light and perfect POV with superb timing! Good notes to explain how you achieved this marvelous shot! Well done and TFS!

best wishes,

Dilshan

That's very cool .. the way you captured them through the veil. Nice to have that solid black as a BG, whether you produced it yourself or not.
Great job
Trudy

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  • Teresat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3410 W: 96 N: 3821] (15934)
  • [2011-02-15 6:16]

Bom dia gader
Your point of view it is excellent...full of beauty and not usual, it works incredible well. ..and you get it with your usual precision, I mean a good focus. It is a beautiful moment very well captured.
I am sure it will works well in B/W too.
I like a lot this photo is full of charm.
Um abrašo
teresa

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1250 W: 106 N: 2911] (22323)
  • [2011-02-15 9:33]

Hi Galder,
BEAUTIFUL. Very unique and well composed. TFS Julie

Hi Galder.
Artistic composition and lovely presentation,so professional in nature captured with good lighting and beautiful details,a wonderful shot.
My Best Wishes
mushtaq

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  • sela Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 633 W: 11 N: 1379] (8213)
  • [2011-02-15 11:42]

HI Galder, this is so beautiful, what a dream! Unique composition.
Regards Rose

I like your pov and your use of the veil to soften the images of the people. It has a good dof with nice details. Nice colors and textures. Well done, tfs.

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