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Justyna


Justyna
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Copyright: Olgierd Rozycki (rolesox) Silver Note Writer [C: 5 W: 0 N: 34] (2404)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-06-08
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 400D, SIGMA 18-125mm F3.8-5.6 DC OS, Marumi 67 mm UV
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-11-28 19:57
Viewed: 1249
Points: 0
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I'll keep this in English, since it'll be easier for anyone else to read.

On the technical aspect, I think especially how beautiful this young girl is, the crop could be a tad better along with the angle that she is lying at and the camera is positioned. Perhaps if you had stood over her, a more dramatic mood and atmosphere would have provided you with a much better experiment.

I do not want to discourage you Olgierd, I think you have access to truly wonderful and beautiful models (Polskie dziewuchy sa najfajniejsze) and I do think that you are trying to infuse different methods into your photography. However, I think that perhaps going for simplicity, not trying awkward angles or crops is at this time the best option. Keep it simple, do not get distracted by backgrounds, focus on the model herself! While keeping it simple is good, experiment as much as you can! Try different angles (I know, I know I just told you to try awkward angles) and different depth.

I wish you luck and I'll keep you in mind (Will check up and see how things are going)! I won't give you a smile, because I don't want you to feel bad that you only got a point instead of two, this way at least you get a proper critique and hopefully you can only improve!

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-Bart

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