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bend in the tweed


bend in the tweed
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Copyright: bryan johnstone (luckybry) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1008 W: 59 N: 1348] (12051)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-10-07
Categories: Daily Life, Nature
Camera: Nikon D90, Sigma 10-20 F 4-5.6 EX DC, 77mm circular polarizer filter
Exposure: f/11, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-10-09 4:18
Viewed: 1297
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
taken at a river walk at Paxton house near duns when out on a shoot with Jonela this is the river tweed making its way to the sea liked the lonely cloud
shot in raw resized was in two minds to crop more but decided to leave it to see what you guys think
ty for looking bryan


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To Mitch: Martinluckybry 1 10-09 08:45
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This is really nice as it is Bryan.

I think cropping any more would lose the dynamacy of the shot.
The extreme bottom left, showing us the tree line/bushes not only balances the frame, but also adds to the lead in of the river into the distance.
Excellent sky scape in addition to the river and surrounding countryside.
The Sigma has done a great job here capturing a nice sharp image, as have you with your composition.

Could I ask, was this shot in auto mode? I see the ISO at 560 has induced quite a lot of noise in the shot.

I've done a little workshop on the sky, using an ND filter just to add more detail to the clouds, which has also increased the polarising effect and then used Noise Reduciton to clean it up a little, hope it works for you.

A really nice shot, well done.

Martin

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2010-10-09 9:58]

Hi Bryan,
A wonderful tranquil play where one's eyes relax.
A nice natural panorama adorned with a marvelous sky and a nice limpid water of the lake.
Very natural colors and a neat presentation.
My best regards,

Francis Xavie

Very peaceful composition with great colors, good for a man's soul after a wild Friday night! Well done, tfs.

Such a razor-sharp view from a wonderful landscape and the river cutting it artistically, Bryan!
The colors are fantastic and clarity is amazing in the shot.
The cloud formation in the sky is so beautifully captured.
I love the ambiance in the work.#
Well seen!

Best regards,
Paras

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  • werdir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1416 W: 147 N: 2654] (11957)
  • [2010-10-09 16:06]

Hi Bryan,

A really nice landscape composition. I don't think I'd change the crop any, it's pretty close to following the rule of thirds as is. The only thing I might try differently is to burn-in the sky a bit. The right side is bordering on OE, and I think it would be better if darkened slightly. Nice work.

Regards,
Werner

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